Need help with lyrics, beautiful song of my 13 yo daughter on bariton uke

Sir Roy

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Hi everybody out there,
this is my first post in the UU forum..;)
My 13 yo daughter Charlotte wrote a wonderful song, she just started learning english, so there are some bugs with the lyrics.
Anybody any suggestions how to fix the lyrics without changing the meaning?
Thanx, SR
Here's the link to the song:
http://www.box.net/shared/hsxo3eyxat
 
Aloha Sir Roy,
WOW your daughter's 13yo...she's very tallented singer and guitar player...really good and she has an appealing voice..
Do youhave the lyrics written down somewhere???
MM Stan..
 
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