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11-10-2014, 03:51 PM
Now and then I get these crazy ideas for stories, so I wrote this one, just for fun. Some folks here might find it amusing. No cost, it's a freebie ...


11-10-2014, 03:58 PM
I love it. I almost cried.

mm stan
11-10-2014, 04:21 PM
OOOOOOO I like freebies Steve... keep um coming.. :)

11-11-2014, 03:06 AM
Many thanks, Steve, I think I need to find the Kleenex box.


11-11-2014, 01:03 PM
Madame Pele in short-shorts. My kind of goddess.

11-11-2014, 02:04 PM
Truly a fantastic story. Bravo and a standing ovation. Well done.

11-11-2014, 02:44 PM
Nice story, thanks! :shaka:

11-11-2014, 08:37 PM
Thank you for sharing your story. It was really cool. I especially like the peek into how people who make things think about the people who use the things they make. And I'd like to believe that Madame Pele is as willing to reward the righteous in real life as she is in your story. And for what it's worth, although the Puna lava flow is widening through breakouts and rising through inflation, the leading edge of the flow hasn't advanced since October 30, the day I left the Big Island.