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Lewiopriceman
02-28-2015, 12:59 AM
Here's the second song from the war of the worlds I've put together. I'm not sure it works quite as well as I would have liked it to, so I'll probably revisit it in the future. Here it is in the meantime..

Any feedback or suggestions would be most welcome!



http://youtu.be/BL7ICveWDEA

Here's the first song as well incase anyone is interested..

http://youtu.be/3I2famxwVpE


Thanks a lot

fynger
02-28-2015, 05:33 AM
Yet another good one....thanks.

uke4ia
02-28-2015, 06:05 AM
The opening riff is good, and the melody that starts around 1:08 is good. On first listen, I didn't recognize what you were playing between about the :30 and 1:00 mark. The electric guitar melody you're playing there isn't coming through -- if you tinker with the arrangement, you might want to try playing this more as a melody line rather than chords.

Lewiopriceman
02-28-2015, 09:35 AM
Thanks so much for the feedback and the tips. That section 30s to 1m is the part I struggled with and I pretty much ended up with a "that'll do" approach in the end.

However after reading your post I've played it again but fingerpicked rather than strummed and it makes a very big difference. I'll have another stab at it!

Cheers guys