The War of The Worlds - Horsell Common and The Heat Ray

Here's the second song from the war of the worlds I've put together. I'm not sure it works quite as well as I would have liked it to, so I'll probably revisit it in the future. Here it is in the meantime..

Any feedback or suggestions would be most welcome!




Here's the first song as well incase anyone is interested..

http://youtu.be/3I2famxwVpE


Thanks a lot

Yet another good one....thanks.

The opening riff is good, and the melody that starts around 1:08 is good. On first listen, I didn't recognize what you were playing between about the :30 and 1:00 mark. The electric guitar melody you're playing there isn't coming through -- if you tinker with the arrangement, you might want to try playing this more as a melody line rather than chords.

Thanks so much for the feedback and the tips. That section 30s to 1m is the part I struggled with and I pretty much ended up with a "that'll do" approach in the end.

However after reading your post I've played it again but fingerpicked rather than strummed and it makes a very big difference. I'll have another stab at it!

Cheers guys