Jeff....
Remember, you asked for feedback, right? I've got to be honest with you. If I weren't, my comments would be worthless. Please take this is the way that it is offered....as constructive criticism.
I didn't understand a single word you sang until you got to the very end and sang the words "deprivation blues". Now, that could be due to any number of things, including....
- The uke was louder than the vocals on your recording
- You may need to ennunciate more clearly
- You may need to project more, vocally
That said, I think you should consider giving it another try! Get a better volume balance between the uke and the vocal, speak (sing) clearly, and belt out the vocal a bit more. I'd like to actually hear what your song has to say....