View Full Version : Red and Silky

Aldrine Guerrero
03-20-2008, 10:20 PM
My newest original song :D
You can take a listen to it at my MySpace:


Lemme know what you think guys. Is this one a keeper or tosser?


03-21-2008, 12:15 AM
To be honest with you Aldrine, i enjoyed this song.. The slides sound nice (if they are slides, haha) - The solo parts of the song sound great infact. Its got good words..

I like this one a lot, thanks

03-21-2008, 12:26 AM
great song aldrine, can hear that passion in the song.

03-21-2008, 02:47 AM
I'll be honest dude it was terrible. just terrible..


03-21-2008, 03:32 AM
NIce one, a very laid back and cool sound to it.

03-21-2008, 04:50 AM
Definitely a keeper.

03-21-2008, 06:06 AM
KEEP IT! it actually has almost the exact same chord progression as one of my songs. So great minds think alike! haha! putting it on my ipod now... :D

03-21-2008, 07:02 AM
Am I the only one who hears "Get all red and sucky for me" in the chorus ?:confused:

Fred Miu
03-21-2008, 07:09 AM
now that you point it out, it sounds lie it. hahaha but i think he saying "sliky" hella fast and it sounds like "sucky"

03-21-2008, 11:44 PM
keeper. Nice Song.

03-22-2008, 05:14 AM
Hey Aldrine how did you come up with this song?

Aldrine Guerrero
03-22-2008, 07:17 AM
Thanks for all the comments folks!

I received a few PM's as well as far as constructive criticism. I appreciate each and every one of those. Feedback is pretty important to me when writing a new tune. I wasn't too confident about the other stuff I did in the past, but once people showed some feedback (good and bad) I started to have some confidence in my writing a little bit more.

How did I come up with this song?
If you go to my MySpace page and look at the picture for that song. You'll see :D that's all I'm gonna say about that hahaha

Glad that most of you guys like it! I'll try to give this song justice when I do the "real" take.... :X

03-22-2008, 09:44 AM
Keep it bro! Awesome tune, very charming ...

03-31-2008, 06:18 PM
keeper but it would be cool if u can play this song in your youchube, very soothing song i can fall asleep listening to it

03-31-2008, 08:16 PM
definitely a keeper

03-31-2008, 10:51 PM
is there anyway to hear close to you on your myspace Aldrine -i really liked that song

04-01-2008, 03:22 AM
Nice song bro.

04-02-2008, 02:31 AM
Passion red and silky smooth! Great song. Definite keeper!!

04-02-2008, 11:31 AM
I love the mellow groove of this song. Great tasty fills. Definatley a keeper.

06-19-2008, 11:46 AM
Oh, how appropriate for your 69th video. XD

Fred Miu
06-19-2008, 01:20 PM
Oh, how appropriate for your 69th video. XD

only you....;):p

06-24-2008, 04:48 AM
what are the lyrics?