dannyman
Well-known member
hey guys, i write and have written several songs so far, and finished them all without difficulty... this one, however, just doesn't seem to want to be finished. i don't really know where to take the song, and need a way to end it/ make it a little longer...
any suggestions?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y0NCA5xLVuE
(that link will take you to where i play what i have of the song so far... check out my REAL youtube channel if you want to as well)
thanks for any help!!
C G
hey pretty girl
AM F
you know I want to be
C G
lying here
AM F
with you close to me
C E7-A7
as we intertwine
C F
and forget about time
(SAME PROGRESSION)
when its you I see
I get so incredibly happy
maybe write
a tune on
my ukulele
so I can sing you to sleep
F C G
everyday I take precious time
F C G
to think about you and i'm glad you're mine
F C G
theres an image I can plainly see
F C G
of you lying beside me
(FIRST PROGRESSION)
we go to the beach
I try to kiss you there
irresistibly cute
with sand in your hair
what can I say
you make me feel this way
any suggestions?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y0NCA5xLVuE
(that link will take you to where i play what i have of the song so far... check out my REAL youtube channel if you want to as well)
thanks for any help!!
C G
hey pretty girl
AM F
you know I want to be
C G
lying here
AM F
with you close to me
C E7-A7
as we intertwine
C F
and forget about time
(SAME PROGRESSION)
when its you I see
I get so incredibly happy
maybe write
a tune on
my ukulele
so I can sing you to sleep
F C G
everyday I take precious time
F C G
to think about you and i'm glad you're mine
F C G
theres an image I can plainly see
F C G
of you lying beside me
(FIRST PROGRESSION)
we go to the beach
I try to kiss you there
irresistibly cute
with sand in your hair
what can I say
you make me feel this way