View Full Version : My New Song!

01-17-2010, 11:24 PM
My first with lyrics...

The Youtube Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=brN4HvnLvJ4

The mp3: http://sites.google.com/site/ivebencrazy/mp3-s/mp3-s-for-originals-1

01-18-2010, 02:25 AM
Are you sure it's your first? It sounds great.

01-18-2010, 08:30 AM
Yup! First one! I have written like half of two other songs, but never finished one until now. Thank you! :D

Papa Dave
01-18-2010, 08:39 AM
Wow! I think you did really well with this. Nice!

01-18-2010, 08:43 AM
Thank you! :) I worked really hard on it!

01-18-2010, 09:37 AM
Great job! Such a lovely melody. You can hear your heart in this song. It's wonderful! :)

01-18-2010, 09:57 AM
Fabulous job!

01-18-2010, 10:23 AM
this sounds great

01-18-2010, 12:41 PM
Thank you everybody! :] I'm writing another one, too! but I have finals this week so it may be up by like Saturday. Maybe earlier...

Johnny Elsewhere
01-31-2010, 10:12 AM
This is very catchy; very easy on the ears.

Your voice really compliments the ukulele well! Congratulations!

Looking forward to hearing more from you!

02-06-2010, 06:11 PM
...dude. Okay, I just listened to this, and... dude... Just... dude. That... was... wicked.

I absolutely love this. I am so not kidding. You put me to shame, sir, to shame!

I'ma listen to this again.

02-07-2010, 05:46 AM
Fantastic song! You have a great voice and a great style, and the lyrics really speak.

02-07-2010, 06:01 AM
That's beautiful - I've subscribed to your channel. My first day on UU and I find this. This place is great!



03-14-2010, 08:33 PM
haha... wow... can't believe this is still on the first page. Threads travel slowly in the songwriting I guess... but thank you! And you can hear more from me! Just posted another today! :D

oh my! There's a second page! I was responding to that other guy, but thanks everyone! I won't be posting on this thread again, either. I wanted to thank rather than revive the thread.

03-15-2010, 08:08 PM
Fantastic! But now my first song that I'm working on feels a little inadequate =)

05-01-2010, 02:55 PM
That was just amazing. I can;t believe that was your first, those lyrics were amazing and you have a great voice. Amazing job!

05-05-2010, 04:52 PM
that was fantastic. really, it was. it was simple, just you and your uke, but it was great. im mad at you. :P i've been trying to write a whole song for over 7 years. i haven't managed a single one. it's just that i have all these freelings i can't put into words. you, sir, have earned my thanks, for this was pure ear candy. excuse me, i have to go listen again. :D

07-28-2010, 10:20 AM
i like that!

how are you recording? what are you using?

...i always got lots of acoustic noise in my recordings...

greetz from hamburg


09-05-2010, 12:34 PM
its great! its got a sense of nostalgia while it also provides meaning. Its sort of like song about wondering but with love song lyrics.

Here I go rambling again

09-06-2010, 09:41 AM
The thread revival got me listening to your song... and then another. I was impressed. I thought they were both very good. Great lyrics, great sound. Even liked the videos. Great job. Keep up the good work.

09-14-2010, 05:07 PM
A very good first attempt – keep going to make your dreams come true and have faith in your talent and yourself Can do with a little polishing but that will improve with time and practice Make the best of the opportunities that you get as we may not get another one again You wouldn’t have got so much positive energy if there wasn’t something to it Hoping to see you on the “big” stage shortly

09-16-2010, 10:17 AM
He sure seems to have got a lot of fans and has been an inspiration to many Really seems to be talented and I am sure will make a name for himself in the music world in a short time Just a question of getting the right opportunity and the right platform He’s definitely got what it takes to make it big in the music industry Hope he can realize his dream and make it big

09-16-2010, 10:33 AM
Sweet - great voice & the tune compliments the lyrics well.

10-05-2010, 08:04 AM
Woah, this song was fantastic. Great playing and very catchy song. Nice!