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IveBenCrazy
03-14-2010, 04:21 PM
I don't know why it took me so long to get back in the groove, but I wrote another song! :D The only issue was the middle section. Is the tune good, or should I fix that? Here's the link and lyrics (Youtube video up soon?):

http://sites.google.com/site/ivebencrazy/mp3-s/mp3-s-for-originals-1/AmazingDay.mp3?attredirects=0&d=1

I'll be waitin' for that time someday
when I'll be yours and you'll be mine someway
I never cared what all the peo-ple say
'cuz I'm in love with you and that's ok.

There's just a single little spark you bring
To anything that otherwise would seem
a little boring. Don't you see you mean
everything to me and just a little more

Oooo Just a little more. It's you that I adore. So let me hold you let me keep you let me spend my life with your hand in mine. It's such a better time

I'll dare to live so long as there is two
that's you and me and so I'm never blue
I'm really lucky there was one like you
Everyday brings something new

I'm always captured by the way you sway
The words you say scare all my fears a-way
I'm quite sure our silly love will stay
you make me feel like it's an always amazin' day
Oooo I want you to stay. It's such a better day

IveBenCrazy
03-14-2010, 04:25 PM
I guess it's the bridge I was having issues with. Still am, just didn't name it. :P please offer your help on it!