Hey everyone, heres a song i wrote recently. any suggestions for titles/keys?
VERSE 1
Something about me will give it away
That I can’t say what I want to say
Jaw hangs slack as I fumble for sound
Though I know what to say to astound
But the moment passes and I hang my head
Because I can’t speak, my words are dead
VERSE 2
Hans Christian Anderson’s little mermaid
Gave up her voice just to try and get laid
But from one who doesn’t have that to hand out
It makes no sense without a shred of doubt
That to speak is to live, to talk and converse
This drive is primary and always comes first
VERSE 3
Man from Beast, Beast from Man
A man can think, I don’t think a beast can
But yet from low to high they all communicate
So why am I below these, what is this fate
Why can’t I saw what I need
Is this punishment for some pre-incarnated deed
BRIDGE
Clamped down on my Lips
Jaw glued shut
Hands around my neck
And I can’t say
And I can’t say
What I need to say
CHORUS
Nick Andros’s hands are over my sneer
Face contorts as I try and tell you dear
How much you matter, how much you mean
Always a smile and a shoulder to lean
And you always know exactly what I say
For you are the light that lights my way
VERSE 1
Something about me will give it away
That I can’t say what I want to say
Jaw hangs slack as I fumble for sound
Though I know what to say to astound
But the moment passes and I hang my head
Because I can’t speak, my words are dead
VERSE 2
Hans Christian Anderson’s little mermaid
Gave up her voice just to try and get laid
But from one who doesn’t have that to hand out
It makes no sense without a shred of doubt
That to speak is to live, to talk and converse
This drive is primary and always comes first
VERSE 3
Man from Beast, Beast from Man
A man can think, I don’t think a beast can
But yet from low to high they all communicate
So why am I below these, what is this fate
Why can’t I saw what I need
Is this punishment for some pre-incarnated deed
BRIDGE
Clamped down on my Lips
Jaw glued shut
Hands around my neck
And I can’t say
And I can’t say
What I need to say
CHORUS
Nick Andros’s hands are over my sneer
Face contorts as I try and tell you dear
How much you matter, how much you mean
Always a smile and a shoulder to lean
And you always know exactly what I say
For you are the light that lights my way