Wrinkled Petals - Original_Rough Draft. Thoughts? =)

Hey guys, just been foolin around and adding things together that I've had on hand for a while, and I'm liking the results! It's very very rough, and you can tell at the end I didn't really know how to blend 2 parts together haha. But tell me what you think!

Happy ukin,
-Dane

I like the words.

It's a little reminisant of a Beatles tune that I can't quite put my finger on....

I wouldn't be surprised if it was, it's so hard to tell if a tune I envision in my head is mine or just an accumulation of other things I've heard. I guess that's how it is with every song though, gotta be inspired from something right?