Original song feedback needed

I think it's a good song, like I said in the last thread. Just keep writing.
 
I like the song, but I think the video is a bit distracting when some of the elements are out of sync. But that's just like... my opinion man. Well done. Keep it up.
 
a nice sweet tune... lovely melody, good change-up on chord progression. the lyrics are not posted, so its difficult to provide an eval on the entire song. overall, very listenable. :)
 
The lyrics are in the description. Im sure to keep writing seeso
thanks for you feedback guys :)
 
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