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Adie227
09-05-2010, 01:10 PM
My latest Original.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sWGJIKTgOOE

Any feedback guys? Let me know what you think. A lot of friends and familly like it, maybe they are biased views, thanks guys :)


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sWGJIKTgOOE

seeso
09-05-2010, 01:27 PM
I think it's a good song, like I said in the last thread. Just keep writing.

Keef
09-05-2010, 01:38 PM
...... I like it :)

rjamesak
09-05-2010, 04:12 PM
I like the song, but I think the video is a bit distracting when some of the elements are out of sync. But that's just like... my opinion man. Well done. Keep it up.

telebob
09-05-2010, 04:38 PM
a nice sweet tune... lovely melody, good change-up on chord progression. the lyrics are not posted, so its difficult to provide an eval on the entire song. overall, very listenable. :)

mm stan
09-05-2010, 07:55 PM
Aloha Adie227,
I think it's a nice song...nice rhythm and flow...
MM Stan...

Adie227
09-06-2010, 01:13 PM
The lyrics are in the description. Im sure to keep writing seeso
thanks for you feedback guys :)