View Full Version : Not actually a song;)

09-29-2010, 12:21 PM
I love to write poetry so hear it is hope you guys dont mind:)

Look up into the sky wish to the stars tonight.
These perfect times are worth whenever we fight.
It's not that we don't care.
it's that we care enough for are feelings to share.
It's not like were flawless.
But next to you it's only happiness.
So here's the poem I give to you.
Wrapped up in it is my heart to.
Treasure it or trash it.
No matter who sees it you'll still be the only true fit.
Your critique.
Keeps me unique.
Pointing out when I'm wrong.
Keeps me strong.
So promise me just this night.
We won't fight.
Because I love you baby.
And your more then just a maybe.

Be harsh:)

10-05-2010, 08:06 AM
Harsh? No way. This was awesome. Really great. Thanks for sharing!