Play on G and C

Here's a little tune I was fooling around with and decided to record. I don't think I'm done with it yet. I'm not too fond of the way the phrases are put together and am thinking of mixing them up a bit. I don't want it to sound too circular- but I want it to come full circle- if that makes any sense...

Well... Here is version one anyways:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hcw6gLVyCoA

I thought that sounded really nice! If you do make any changes, I'd be really interested to see what it progresses to as well.