Original song for Uke, any feedback would be appreciated.

Improv'd most of it to my girlfriend awhile back just messin' around and decided it was a catchy tune so I finished it. I know the recording sucks and my singing is awful but I got distracted by my alarm clock and was late for work. X_x Plus it wasn't anything serious and I wanna see what others think of it. Enjoi.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dYWcId0PvE0

Lyrics:
I know it sound dumb, hey I know it sound lame
but I love my gal like the summer rain,
autumn breeze, and winter snow
cuz spring blossomed back those feelings I know

A-A-B-Down-Left-Right-Uppercut.
She makin' my day feel so, so kick butt now-now-now.
A-A-B-Down-Left-Right-Uppercut.
I don't want anymore cuz she gave me enough love.
La-ah-ah-ah-ah-ove...

The way that her hair runs straight down her neck
to play connect the dots thru those freckles that she gets.
I'd say that she was born straight out of a stencil
and drawn up using god's sharpest pencils.

A-A-B-Down-Left-Right-Uppercut.
She makin' my day feel so, so kick butt now-now-now.
A-A-B-Down-Left-Right-Uppercut.
I don't want anymore cuz she gave me enough love.
La-ah-ah-ah-ah-ove...

Reach in my pocket just for a sec
to feel around and see what I can get:
a few pennies, a quarter, and a dime
but she makes me feel so rich in this heart of mine

Cuz she's the girl of my dreams
and I know as strange as it seems
but I think she's the only one for me,
been thinkin' about her since I was seventeen.

Aloha Steve,
Nice....sounds like you really love your gal!!! cool!!!thanks for sharing....Happy Holidays!!! MM Stan..

heySteve

love the song mate. Nice chords...great poppy sound, they fit together well. Only advice I'd give is to work on your voice a little projection wise...sounds like you're holding back and not letting it out totally. But your playing is cool and the lyrics sweet too mate. Awesome! Have a great Christmas and New Year. By the way, what does your girlfriend think of the finished product?