"new year new you" original by rae carter

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• Jan 11, 2011

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hi all your constructive criticism would be welcomed on this as im not 100% sure on the chorus. I like the verse and middle but not sure the chorus works. thanks a lot

 

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• Jan 14, 2011

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Sounded good to me,maybe add some different chords into the chorus. well done Rae.

 

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• Jan 16, 2011

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Thats my feelings bud ill revisit the chorus cheers