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lordlogan
03-21-2011, 11:15 AM
The lies and lust.*
Broken finally my trust.
Ruined plain sight.
All I would do is fight.*
Chained.*
Restrained.*
Lost in the dark.*
Trying to make my mark.*
For all to see.*
Who I am, me.*

Chained
Restrained*

Chained*
Restrained*

Lost in fear*
Nothing left to hear
No apologies.*
You've taken your fees.*
My spirit broke.*
On fear I choke.*

Chained!*
Restrained!*

Spirit broke
Fear I choke!*

Breaking free.*
Nothing left to see.*
You've taken what you can.*
Taken me from boy to man.


This is my first song attempt whart do you guys think?