poor old joe ukulele original first take

raecarter · Apr 28, 2011

Hi everyone I just wrote this today. Its about the banking system and the government affecting our lives. This is the rough lyrics first take so could change. I'd love to hear your views please http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SWJosB2J-G0

UkuEroll · Apr 30, 2011

Nice one Rae, your getting quite good a this lark. Billy Bragg would love it! Maybe you could vary the strum pattern a bit, apart from that it sounded well good, and very topical.

raecarter · Apr 30, 2011

Cheers bud I was going for Billy Bragg! Where would you suggest a strum pattern change and change to what? Thanks for constructive criticism

PeteyHoudini · May 1, 2011

I thought it was great! Good message and all!

Cheers,

Petey

poor old joe ukulele original first take

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