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RonnieMunoz55
05-20-2011, 04:14 PM
Well Hey there !
I'm kinda new to writing songs but here are the lyrics I could use some chords or help with.

And So the day is almost over
Shouldn't let it go to waste. .
The world is turnin back now
Let em see us thrown away.

Woke Up this mornin'
Nothin' but a heartache

We could have gone so far
Insecurities to toss away

What a dangerous game to play
When your world is at stake. .
There is no turnin' back now
Look at us fade away

Say goodbye to all the people
who worshiped what you've tossed away

And there's not much left to midnight
our lives slowly ticking away. .
Said the world's turning over
look at it fade to gray.

:b

mrjewkulele
05-20-2011, 05:01 PM
wow nice job!

RonnieMunoz55
05-20-2011, 05:15 PM
wow really? (:

Mitch Dickson
08-21-2011, 03:53 AM
Your wandering around, thoughts too scattered, no binding. When you write, first reduce the story you want to tell to one sentence, then don't get off that thought. Take the Eagles "Lying Eyes" for instance. Can be reduced: to Pretty girl, sells out soul for money then cheats cause can't deal with decision and lonliness. Once the hook, "lying Eyes" was found, the rest was easy.

I wrote a song once about an old man greiving for his lost wife and not being able to get past the loss. Chorus went:

All alone in an old country graveyard
In the midst of the garden of stone
He comes in the quiet of the evening
Just to sit and talk to her all alone

Try it :)

Mitch DIckson