My first few original songs

Morning everyone,

I've been writing my first set of original songs and I've uploaded 3 of them to youtube;

Opposite World
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w5PcxRHkipo

The Date (True story about a date I had)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NMf0xX30xKw&feature=related

Vampire Fiction (my least favourite, and needs significant rewriting)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kCm6qEVi2Bs&feature=related

I'd much appreciate any feedback you have - although I know I can't sing!

Cheers

No problem with your singing. I enjoyed them all.