(new updated version) Market Town original ukulele song

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mD3K41kS4uU Here is the song i uploaded yesterday but with an extra version and an instrumental added. what do you all think?

I dig it, man, like the changes..... the new verse is great and the whole thing hangs together well. I think those couple of measures of no vocals and the shorter ending help, really cleaned it up nicely. Great tune!

BTW - Thanks for the boost -your post yesterday actually got me inspired to finish up my first original tune last night..... just finished recording it, it's uploading to youtube now....