washburn647
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So, I just wrote a song with uke music, and figured I'd see if people liked it. Here it is, with chord progression and intro/outro tab.
Intro:
|3-3-3-3-3-3-2-0|
|0-0-0-0-0-0-0-2|
|0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0|
|----------------|x2
|3-3-3-3-3-3-2-0|
|0-0-0-0-0-0-0-2|
|1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1|
|----------------|x2
Then, triplet strum patterns of A then F, repeating about 6 times, before a few strums of F6add9.
Singing part:
G
Tiny words on a tiny screen.
G6 Am7
You and me are inside the machine, but I...
G Gaug G
I gotta get out
______________
Chorus:
G
Every night you always frustrate
G6 Am7
But by now its far too late but I...
G Gaug G
Gotta find a way out
C F G
And I'm in... too... deep.
C F G
You know I... can't... sleep.
G -----------
This time, don't come back again.
_______________
Same strum pattern/chord progression as "singing part"...
Look at me now, I got something new
This time, something's really true
And we... We're a hell of a lot better, don't ya think.
You were gone without saying goodbye
No, I don't want the millionth try
But I... I'm doing just fine.
Chorus
Back to the A-F progression, but with words...
A F
And I wish you all the best
A F
It's a shame I didn't pass the test
A F
If we had both been headed west
Am7 ----------------------
We could have walked together...
Now the intro, strummed a little faster...
|3-3-3-3-3-3-2-0|
|0-0-0-0-0-0-0-2|
|0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0|
|----------------|x2
|3-3-3-3-3-3-2-3| let ring
|0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0|
|0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0|
|----------------|x2
And that's it. I don't really have a title, I just wanted to post mainly to see what people thought of the lyrics, but also the melody. So please don't be too harsh, it's my first song, but I would like some other opinions.
Intro:
|3-3-3-3-3-3-2-0|
|0-0-0-0-0-0-0-2|
|0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0|
|----------------|x2
|3-3-3-3-3-3-2-0|
|0-0-0-0-0-0-0-2|
|1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1|
|----------------|x2
Then, triplet strum patterns of A then F, repeating about 6 times, before a few strums of F6add9.
Singing part:
G
Tiny words on a tiny screen.
G6 Am7
You and me are inside the machine, but I...
G Gaug G
I gotta get out
______________
Chorus:
G
Every night you always frustrate
G6 Am7
But by now its far too late but I...
G Gaug G
Gotta find a way out
C F G
And I'm in... too... deep.
C F G
You know I... can't... sleep.
G -----------
This time, don't come back again.
_______________
Same strum pattern/chord progression as "singing part"...
Look at me now, I got something new
This time, something's really true
And we... We're a hell of a lot better, don't ya think.
You were gone without saying goodbye
No, I don't want the millionth try
But I... I'm doing just fine.
Chorus
Back to the A-F progression, but with words...
A F
And I wish you all the best
A F
It's a shame I didn't pass the test
A F
If we had both been headed west
Am7 ----------------------
We could have walked together...
Now the intro, strummed a little faster...
|3-3-3-3-3-3-2-0|
|0-0-0-0-0-0-0-2|
|0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0|
|----------------|x2
|3-3-3-3-3-3-2-3| let ring
|0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0|
|0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0|
|----------------|x2
And that's it. I don't really have a title, I just wanted to post mainly to see what people thought of the lyrics, but also the melody. So please don't be too harsh, it's my first song, but I would like some other opinions.