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kwkak37
10-15-2011, 03:03 AM
Hello, first post on UU.
I've only written one song before, and that needs severe editing.
But I was playing along on my uke when I somehow created this through my subconscious or my unconscious or whatever you use to not make melodies consciously (who says you need drugs to make new melodies). Then the chords just put themselves in place together, and

So I made 3 versions of my instrumental. The first one (first iteration) is the slower version. I accidentally created the ending while recording this video, but it sounded fresh so I included it in. The second iteration is the double-time (or slower?) version. The third iteration is the one with the D7 chord at the end.

So I was wondering if I were to put it as an introduction or a chorus of a song, which version would be the best? Even I don't know which song it would be in because I haven't written it yet. But... um... you know.

Any constructive criticism would be most welcome. Thanks!

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