What do you think??

I made this for a ukulele company and it seems like the audio got jacked...what do you all think of it?

The narrator is trying to say too much, and too quietly. I think the message should be MUCH simpler.

I like the photos (except the ones that are too personal and irrelevant, like the married couple on the beach).

I like Eddie Finn ukes.

Thanks when I made it it was for a contest and they had you say eddy finn and smell the tropics 3 times so thats what I was doing and I should have thought as well about the photos I just didn't have to many and I thought my wedding photo added to the tropical that they wanted...thanks for the input. Also when i made it the sound was better but seems like when I uploaded it the sound got jacked?