was it worth it ukulele original

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Hope you like. This is a nearly finished work if you have any comments or advice for it please let me know thanks rae http://youtu.be/XH4cPr3fsN4
 
I think it works well as a pop song - I would have liked a bit more 'understanding' of why (NOT justification, there was none) - you don't capture the alienation and utter 'boredness' of some of these kids, but perhaps you weren't after that.
 
I think it works well as a pop song - I would have liked a bit more 'understanding' of why (NOT justification, there was none) - you don't capture the alienation and utter 'boredness' of some of these kids, but perhaps you weren't after that.

Hi thanks for that. I guess when I sat down to write it it was solely about them being silly and not appreciating the consequences of their actions.
 
nice stuff here Rae, very emotional tune, hits hard
 
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