I think it works well as a pop song - I would have liked a bit more 'understanding' of why (NOT justification, there was none) - you don't capture the alienation and utter 'boredness' of some of these kids, but perhaps you weren't after that.
I think it works well as a pop song - I would have liked a bit more 'understanding' of why (NOT justification, there was none) - you don't capture the alienation and utter 'boredness' of some of these kids, but perhaps you weren't after that.