An original fingerstyle piece - The Forbidden Fruit!

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• Feb 7, 2012

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Hi guys!



I've written this song a long time ago and always wanted to record and upload it to YouTube. So I finally decide to do so yesterday.
As I am getting criticism, but not of Ukulele players, I challenge you to criticise! If this is quite good I'll may upload another piece.

Thanks in advance!
CoGGii

 

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• Feb 7, 2012

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My daughter says she likes it. Where is the criticism coming from?

 

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• Feb 8, 2012

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Glad she liked it!
I got some reviews from friends, but they don't play the uke.

 

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• Feb 8, 2012

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Thought it was great... Nice pace and build up of moods in there...Let's see if we can bump this thread and get you to post more!


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• Mar 8, 2012

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I liked it! Great technique. My only crit would be that the sections don't seem connected. Like the first is the beginning to a pop song, the next bit a folk song.

(but what do I know, total noob myself, lol)

 

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• Mar 18, 2012

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Sounds awesome!

 

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• Mar 18, 2012

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I totally love it, but it has the sound of two different songs together--but that's not a bad thing. The famous "Layla" was actually two songs including a vamp that Blapton simply loved and threw in there. That's why it sounds like two songs.