My original song, "You leave me"

Hey guys this is a song I wrote about waiting for someone who never comes around. Hope you enjoyed it

-You Leave Me- VictOrO.
First your here, and then you go away
First your near, and then your far away

You leave me, you leave me all alone
You leave me, you leave me with no choice, but to miss you

I waited all of day for you, I waited all the night for you
I called you, are you coming home, I waited but still no show

You leave me, you leave me all alone
You leave me, you leave me with no choice, but to miss you

So babe, are you coming home?
Cuz I been here, for far too damn long

First your here, and then you go away
First your near, and then your far away

Thanks for sharing! I enjoyed it.

Nice to see something other than a cover song!

Hey, good job. You express yourself quite nicely. Very simple, but very powerful. Reminds me a bit of Daniel Johnston for some reason.

Thank you guys for your feedback, it means a lot btw, who is Daniel Johnson?

Thank you so much Glad you enjoyed it.

In the future, Victoro, you'll get more people looking at your videos if you put them on the "Videos and Links" board.

haha thank you for the suggestion! My apologies I'm new here I wasn't aware of it