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05-21-2012, 12:18 PM
i actually posted this in the videos thread so if im breaking some kind of rule posting it here too im sorry lol.


considering making this song a little longer

05-25-2012, 06:59 AM
Are you going to play with the idea of the informality of the title and the intimacy of the message some more? I can hear a chorus in a the major key interrupting at the point the video stops with a more hopeful wish by the narrator for change, that falls back into the minor for more soul examining in verse two.