A couple of uke songs by me

I love your voice!!! But that accent is not from Salisbury, is it?

The first song is lovely. Great accompaniment. I really like how you take a simple idea "I wrote your name" and run with it, playing with all the different situations you might write it and the consequences. Fun and an imaginative final too. But I'd lose the swear word if you ever want to hear that on the radio. (I Know, daft isn't it, but that's the world as is).

The second song is a great pop song that really had me toe-tapping from start to finish. (It reminded me of something Kirsty McColl might have written).

With your talent you should easily get the Ukulele on "Britain's Got Talent" ;). Do it ASAP - You sound a lot better than 98% of the dross on that show who have won the damn thing! Well done! Keep at it! And remember, the more songs you write, the easier it gets and the more you learn about the craft.
 
Hey, thanks guys.

barbablanca i guess i try to conceal my wiltshire roots when singing haha. what accent do you think i havE?

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