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    Question Original song for Uke, any feedback would be appreciated.

    Improv'd most of it to my girlfriend awhile back just messin' around and decided it was a catchy tune so I finished it. I know the recording sucks and my singing is awful but I got distracted by my alarm clock and was late for work. X_x Plus it wasn't anything serious and I wanna see what others think of it. Enjoi.


    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dYWcId0PvE0

    Lyrics:
    I know it sound dumb, hey I know it sound lame
    but I love my gal like the summer rain,
    autumn breeze, and winter snow
    cuz spring blossomed back those feelings I know

    A-A-B-Down-Left-Right-Uppercut.
    She makin' my day feel so, so kick butt now-now-now.
    A-A-B-Down-Left-Right-Uppercut.
    I don't want anymore cuz she gave me enough love.
    La-ah-ah-ah-ah-ove...

    The way that her hair runs straight down her neck
    to play connect the dots thru those freckles that she gets.
    I'd say that she was born straight out of a stencil
    and drawn up using god's sharpest pencils.

    A-A-B-Down-Left-Right-Uppercut.
    She makin' my day feel so, so kick butt now-now-now.
    A-A-B-Down-Left-Right-Uppercut.
    I don't want anymore cuz she gave me enough love.
    La-ah-ah-ah-ah-ove...

    Reach in my pocket just for a sec
    to feel around and see what I can get:
    a few pennies, a quarter, and a dime
    but she makes me feel so rich in this heart of mine

    Cuz she's the girl of my dreams
    and I know as strange as it seems
    but I think she's the only one for me,
    been thinkin' about her since I was seventeen.

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    Aloha Steve,
    Nice....sounds like you really love your gal!!! cool!!!thanks for sharing....Happy Holidays!!! MM Stan..

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    heySteve

    love the song mate. Nice chords...great poppy sound, they fit together well. Only advice I'd give is to work on your voice a little projection wise...sounds like you're holding back and not letting it out totally. But your playing is cool and the lyrics sweet too mate. Awesome! Have a great Christmas and New Year. By the way, what does your girlfriend think of the finished product?

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