Song Help Request R.E.M | Losing My Religion (tips and constructive criticism welcome)

[ukudancer]

I've been working on this song concurrently with the Scorpion's Wind of Change...It's a nice change of pace between the two. Anyway, I'd love to hear your thoughts, tips and constructive criticism.

Thanks in advance.

 

[kellyf]

Well done.
Such pleasant nostalgia when I hear this song
I would like to hear like Wind of Change too.)

 

[merlin666]

There's a lot of strumming simple chords that goes on and on and no song, and the piano sounds like it's either out of tune with strumming or playing in the wrong key. I didn't make it through the whole video though as I have very short attention span.